I was too lazy to remove the screentones...so I didn't *laughs*. I think I could've made Sakura's clothes better but... uh... I like how Syaoran's hair turned out *grin*... But I hate not having to color the eyes they way I'm used to *pout*... Yep, that's it...
ok. i think i discovered the technique to the clear eyes. the technique is that there should be a lot of white spaces inside the eyes. heh. then using a clear solid color. XD
I really love how Syaoran's hair turned out, and the petals :D!
Ahaha eyes. What I do by default on EVERYTHING is just erase the shit out of eye lineart, and just colour something completely blank in my style. People like it, I'm happier and in less agony, so it's a win-win situation 8D;;.
Also, excuse me if it's out of my place, but I think Sakura's left arm defies your light source :O
I think you've done an excellent job overall, especially on their hairs. (YOU HAS A TABLET?!?! -jealoussss-) However, your light source on Sakura is so weird, yeah? ....oh man, I was about the go critique your work before knowing if it was ok or not... sorry
other than that. VERY NICE! :D